Omari media blog 2

1) Type up your teacher's feedback   in full  plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. WWW: - use of voice over - well delivered/recorded - very good opening shot - cinematography - fish eye lens, trainer - sound design - sirens, lighter - narrative enigma - use of flashback - non linear narrative  - video rewind  - setting EBI: - typography - resolution of upload - target audience (brief - ofcom 12) 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  three  WWW bullet points and  three  EBI bullet points for your work. WWW:  1. good use of shots with a lot of variety 2. good sound design such as in the reverse effect 3. very clear voice over EBI: 1. should use a different choice font of text on screen 2. better resolution 3. make it suitable to audiences aged 12 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise  statement of intent ? i c

1) Script urban shadows script 2) Shot list urban shadows shot list 3) Mise-en-scene planning cast: boys ages 17-18 costume: street attire e.g. tracksuit make-up: none - gives a more natural aesthetic  props: fake gun/cigarette  lighting: low-key setting: council estate + underground subway + street